» Comics - ch 02 pg 18 - September 18th, 2007, 7:29 pm


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pelica, September 18th, 2007, 7:32 pm


Inking's getting better, don't you think? If you're tired of Yasuri not doing anything (like I am xD) then don't worry; she'll be up and about in a page or two. By the way, what kinds of things story wise do you think needs more clarification on? :0 The promise? Why Luz was locked away? I wanna know so I can better my story-telling skills. X_x




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shiroh, September 19th, 2007, 4:46 am


squee!! first comment!!!^^

go get 'im, luz!XD


Master Michi, October 1st, 2007, 9:49 pm

*going insane*
Well... I'd have to say that I would definately like to know what's the deal with the promise, and why on earth Luz was locked up in a cell... But, to be honest, the way you tell it builds us up for when you reveal the truth. It may be driving me crazy with suspense, but you're doing a good job. Keep up the great work!


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